Dear students,
The feedback for your essay on hosting major sporting even has been completed. In case you forgot where you submitted your work, the essays can be found here.
The following are some good samples which shows a largely logical progression of the PEEEL paragraph. They are not difficult to emulate and most of you are expected to be able to attain their standard. Click on the hyperlinks to read to the essays:
1) Hannah
2) Karen
3) Amelia
4) Ziying
I have also commented on the post "Lesson on elaboration" on Facebook. If you need to learn more about elaboration and paragraph development, do click here and respond to my comment. No questions on this will be entertained in class or during consultation.
Regards,
Mr Ong Chin Meng
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